York+Carter's+thesis

I for one, feel that tourism, generally speaking, is not a form of exploitation, and is very beneficial for the visited country, as well as the visitor.

Tsechu: I feel that this thesis has a lot of unnecessary words such as "I for one, feel that tourism, generally speaking," you can remove it and make it to the point... no need for the extra words.. JUST GET TO THE POINT and you do not need to add "I feel" the fact that its on your paper already reveals your thoughts. So just get to the point and make it argumentative.