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Edits: //The sentence seems to be too wordy. I also think that it might be argumentative but the sentence could be stronger. I would suggest rephrasing it to something like, "Iago proves to be selfish when Othello hired Cassio to be his lieutenant instead of him" or any variation of that. I also would just pick one between "selfish and greedy" because it is unnecessary. "Chosed" is also spelt wrong.//**-//Sybil Errazuriz//**
 * Thesis #1:** Iago is selfish and greedy because Othello did not hire him to be his lieutenant; instead Othello chosed Cassio to serve under him.**-Kaity Kuo**


 * Thesis #2:** Iago's skills in scheming allow him to deceive others and procreate jealousy in Othello.**-Sybil Errazuriz**
 * Edits: To me the statement is a bit obvious and doesn't allow for much interpretation or argument. It's a good topic to talk about, I just think it would be better to add more and expand on this idea. - ** Karen Campos

Edits: Well first of all it should be "Othello's" not "Othello" but I think you already knew that lol. I think it is really good, I think it gives you a lot to write about and it is definitely argumentative. I just have a problem with the word persona, I just think it sounds weird, so maybe you could change that but thats about it.- **Molly Rappold**
 * Thesis #3: Othello fate was that of the typical tragic persona, an act of pride was what led to his downfall. -Karen Campos**


 * Thesis #4:** The women in Othello are treated as one dimensional figures. - **Molly Rappold**
 * Edits: i'd realy like to know why. Your thesis is great and is very argumentative. maybe adding a because would give the readers a sense of where your going with all of this as well as having an idea of why women were seen this way. - ** Betania Carrion
 * Edits:** //This thesis is a bit too brief and simple in my opinion. Remember what Nick explained to us in 9th and 10th grade? That a thesis needs to be something like this, "The women in Othello are treated as one dimensional figure because of X,Y, and Z." -**Kaity Kuo**//

Edits: I think you can re-phrase it a bit. Its a good idea that needs to be expanded on more. Make sure u can question it so it passes the "So What Factor?"- Ashley Martinez
 * Thesis #5:** Othello easily believes the Illusions that Iago creates because of Iago's trickery, jealousy, and hypocracy. - **Betania Carrion**


 * Thesis#6:** The loyalty of the characters in Othello are questioned by their actions of infidelity, manipulation and insecurity.- **Ashley Martinez**
 * Edits:** This thesis is too general I think it would be better if you focus on one character in particular or one theme because there are three themes present. It would make writing an essay easier.


 * Thesis #7:** Othello trusted Iago more than he did Desdemona and this ruined their marriage. -**Sheila Salazar**
 * Edits:** //We already know that in the book Othello trusted Iago more than Desdemona because he was mischievous, but how would you go about arguing your thesis? Once again, you can try using "Nicks" method in doing thesis statements, "Othello trusted Iago more than Desdemona because of X,Y, and Z." -**Kaity Kuo**//

//**Thesis # 8 :** Iagos mischeviousness c////ontributes Othello's belief that Desdemona was unfaithful **-Susan Cserhati**//

//**Thesis # 9:**// Based on the obvious lack of trust Othello had in Desdemona, it's reasonable to say that their love for each other was very shallow. **- Jonathan Layne**


 * Thesis #10:** Othello’s love for Desdemona soon becomes tainted with lies as he searchs for what is truth and fiction.- **Anthony Garcia**


 * Thesis # 11:** Although Iago is perceived as being honest, his conniving disposition tells a different tale, and makes the reader truly wonder about how others really perceive him.

Thesis# 12 Othello’s and Desdemona’s love was not pure because he didn’t trust her as much as he should have. _ franleslie


 * Thesis#12:** __Othello__ is influenced by the racial context of 14th century Europe. The stereotypes, attitudes, and negative connotations associated with Othello stem from the widespread beliefs held about Moors throughout Europe.-**Mabelly Guerrero**

**Thesis #13:** Othello’s subtle insecurity of his wife's infidelity and Iago’s desires to be on the same social level as Othello led them to their downfall. - **Katheren Pomera**

Triggered by jealousy, Iago destroyed the lives of the people around him in a conniving conscious fashion; his actions classify him as a sociopath. -**Randeva Simpkins**
 * Thesis #14:**

Rage, jealousy and deception play equal roles in Othello and these themes provoke/affect each other. - **Ysabella Grossman**
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 * Thesis #16:**
 * The women in Othello represent various levels of class, virtue, and intelligence . -Patricia Paredes**

Thesis#17


 * Iago, as the puppet master, abused the trust of everyone and lead it to everyone's death. This is shown throughout the book, from Roderigo's relationship with Iago, to Emilia’s relationship.- Andy Lam**

Iago is one character that uses Othello’s race as an infrastructure to build up his plan. -T. Ukyab
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 * Thesis 19:**
 * Iago appears as a masterful manipulator as well as a deceptive character, as a result from pushing further the disinclination and uncertainty of other characters. ** Julio Ibanez

Throughout the book you can tell from the first scene Iago would become the villain. Iago’s manipulation affects the course of Othello and Desdemona’s life. He tries to use his ability of manipulation to gain Cassio’s position as lieutenant.--**Harry Attilio**
 * Thesis #20**

Othello’s downfall in Shakespeare’s play __Othello__ was not caused by Iago, but it was caused by Othello himself, converting himself into a jealous and hateful character in the story. **Esteban**
 * Thesis #21**